From: Jim Bird On Behalf Of reviewus@XXXXX.com
Sent: 16 October, 2012 10:04 PM
Subject: Thank you for using XXXXXX – Please Review Us
Dear Valued Customer,
According to our records you placed at least one order through XXXX in September. Thank you very much for your business and may it continue for a very long time.
We at XXXX hope that you are very happy with our services and ask that you spend just a few minutes leaving us a review at either (or both if you would be so kind) of the below sites:
Of course we would prefer a glowing 5 Star review, however we are also interested in any feedback, suggestions or ideas you may have.
Thank you once again for using XXXX, and please do not hesitate to contact us should you have any queries.
Customer Services Manager
What could be improved in this letter?
I find it incredible that this type of templated mass messaging is being used FOR THE FIRST COMMUNICATION to a customer.
Hey did someone just think – it’d be a great idea to get some customer feedback? What ho, Jeeves, let’s off and ask them to say we’re wonderful.
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